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Suzi Lucas
11/19/2020 07:55:02 pm
I like how you used "she" when writing about the snow. Great word choices!
Kiera Lizama
11/20/2020 10:43:18 am
I really love how in depth the theme in the poem "End of Summer" is, I think you found the true meaning behind every word and really worded it perfectly for the MOWAW.
Lauren Hinrichs
11/20/2020 12:01:57 pm
I love how you used personification when describing the birds "dancing". There are quite a few birds that have made their home near my house and constantly fly around, so I knew exactly what you were talking about with that line. Your journal is beautiful!!!
Isaac Johnson
11/20/2020 12:26:42 pm
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem! The structure and detail used in the poem was excellent as well as the story itself. I like how you showed the progression of the sunflower's life and what ended up happening to it, great work!
Marlena Mizzoni
11/21/2020 11:14:21 am
Hope! This journal turned out so amazing! The poem about the sunflower was so captivating. The way you use imagery to convey the picture you want to show was excellent. I love the way how you continued this to show the life of a sunflower! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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