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Charles J
11/20/2020 10:43:44 am
I like how you said the sun smiled down. this was really good
Charles J
11/20/2020 10:48:30 am
great work on using poetic devices. this was my favorite one "The sun gently smiled at the hotel".
Jasmine Sprague
11/20/2020 11:56:38 am
Isaac, I loved how you represented the impatient and sorrow tine in the poem "November Rain", by including your own picture! That made it super insightful!
Brent Belsby
11/20/2020 12:05:59 pm
"The water was calm and reflected the sun’s gentle smile." "The ship roared now" Great use of imagery and personification!
Heather Fuller-Johnson
11/20/2020 12:23:45 pm
Nice work! The creative use of descriptive words and the use of all five senses in your poem is very engaging for the reader, and allows one to experience your journey right along with you. I enjoyed the special attention you gave to describing the evening sun, warm breeze, and sounds experienced at the beginning of the journey, and later the transition you made into the night describing the moon, cold air, and the silence as the journey came to an end. Hope in looking forward to the next journey was a nice touch. Great imagery! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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The IdeaWhile we can't share in the traditional sense, we certainly can spend time appreciating the art of poetry through the projects our peers have created. Please give each project the thoughtful viewing it deserves, then comment on three of your favorites utilizing poetic devices to explain what you like about their project. Comments might look something like, "Wow! I love your use of imagery and simile. They really help me experience the solemn attitude you are creating in your poem," or "Hey! Billy Collins has become one of my favorite poets too; I love his sarcastic attitude and use of imagery as you have revealed here," or "I'm impressed with how creatively you were able to showcase the melancholy tone of "Because I Could Not Stop for Death" as revealed by Emily Dickinson." Please explore projects like and unlike yours and practice describing what it that you like about what you see. The project that earns 100% and has the most comments will earn a prize! Categories
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