Hope
11/20/2020 11:57:58 am
I love your word choice in your final poem! All your descriptive words and verbs were so perfect! It was so easy for me the be there in the poem if that makes sense.
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Makenna Benson
11/20/2020 12:03:02 pm
I love the line in your final poem of "and the waltzing of leaves"! The personification allowed me to imagine the way the leaves were blowing, in an almost magical way.
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Tylin Hertel
11/20/2020 12:12:28 pm
In the final poem "Alive" I really enjoy your word choice I feel like it is full of lots of detail and paints a picture in my head as a read through It
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izzy
11/20/2020 12:13:20 pm
I love the way you used alliteration in your final poem! The first stanza is my favorite, it's so beautiful
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11/20/2020 12:21:37 pm
I love the imagery portrayed by “Shivers and stiff statues, Bare like the scrawny trees” It really helps to see the nature of cold days, especially around fall, and shows how we expect the world to look.
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