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Makenna Benson
11/20/2020 12:18:18 pm
Great work on your poems Lauren! I enjoyed the personification in your line "the brisk autumn winds breathe chilled words down your neck" the most because when I read it, I got goosebumps down my spine!
Jennifer Swisher
11/20/2020 12:22:44 pm
Love love love your writing! So descriptive, and I really like how you made significant metaphors to nature and the human experience, especially with the line, "The wind cries for the moon as the sky says goodnight, and the world starts to close its eyes."
Isaac Johnson
11/20/2020 12:36:55 pm
Amazing job on your poems! I loved how in your final poem "Another Day" you used excellent strucutre and you even included a rhyme scheme as well! The personification and the specific details used throughout were also amazing! You did a great job on this Lauren!
Miranda O'C
11/23/2020 09:19:19 am
This is beautiful! You have always been such a creative writer and have a way to make words flow with feeling. Nicely done! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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