Charles J
11/20/2020 10:53:19 am
love your use of poetic devices this was super finny. "The streets glisten like the glaze on a donut".
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Avery Stark
11/20/2020 10:59:26 am
I loved the simile and the imagery of, "glisten like the glaze of a donut." It really makes the reader be able to envision the image in their mind.
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Jaela Thornburg
11/20/2020 12:08:12 pm
Great poem! I love your use of similes, and your vivid description really gives the reader the sense of winter and the holidays.
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Tylin Hertel
11/20/2020 12:18:47 pm
On slide 8 I really enjoy your use of literary devices especially the simile. I also enjoyed how there is a lot of imagery and you can really draw a picture for every line.
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