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Charles J
11/20/2020 11:04:19 am
I like how you used an anthropomorphism. "Windows gasp for air" and you keep adding to it this was really good.
Gabe Gerber
11/20/2020 12:02:09 pm
I really love how you shaped your poem with each line getting shorter to convey your message about how the rain is very calming.
Kayli Lucas
11/20/2020 12:08:09 pm
I liked how the structure of your poem was well thought out. I enjoyed how you used the word "she" as the rain. I also liked how your tone of the poem reminded me of rain.
Beckett Schoenleber
11/20/2020 12:16:03 pm
My favorite line in the final poem was: "Windows gasp for air wallowing in the tears she provides them." The personification of the window provided a really unique description of a sight we have all seen plenty of times. You used this style throughout the poem, and I feel that it elevated the meaning of rain. I also like how you spoke in first person, that made it more personal.
Isaac Johnson
11/20/2020 12:16:37 pm
I loved your excellent use of structure and the way that it shaped the poem as well as your use of anthropomorphism! I also love the tone you used here as well, this poem turned out amazing!
William Emert
11/20/2020 12:19:34 pm
I adore your use of structure! You cleverly made the sentences gradually grow shorter in length throughout the length of the poem, adding the effect of simpler ideas as the character in the poem's mind calms.
Marisity Kern
11/20/2020 12:21:28 pm
I really liked the tone and imagery you used in your rain poem it really put us into your thoughts. I also really loved the structure you used at the end with it getting shorter and shorter into the last word.
Jake Jongeward
11/20/2020 02:55:24 pm
Mar! This is so good! I absolutely love the layout and color scheme you chose for the project. Within the rain poem, the unique use of structure was so pleasing to read. The intense imagery used to describe the feelings and express your tone was excellent and well done in my opinion! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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